Published by Dell on April 2, 2024
Genres: Contemporary Romance, Romance
Pages: 368
Format: eARC
Source: Publisher (Netgalley)
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Nora Mackenzie’s entire career lies in the hands of famous NFL tight end Derek Pender who also happens to be her extremely hot college ex-boyfriend. Nora didn’t end things as gracefully as she could have back then, and now it’s come back to haunt her. Derek is her first client as an official full-time sports agent and he’s holding a grudge.
Derek has set his sights on a little friendly revenge. If Nora Mackenzie, the first girl to ever break his heart, wants to be his agent, oh he’ll let her be his agent. The plan is make Nora’s life absolutely miserable. But if Derek knows anything about the woman he once loved—she won’t quit easily.
Instead of giving in, Nora starts a scheme of her own. But then a wild night in Vegas leads to Nora and Derek in bed the next morning married. With their rule book out the window, could this new relationship be the thing to save their careers?
I thought that surely I would love this one because it’s in the same world and has the same characters as The Cheat Sheet, but unfortunately I DNFed The Rule Book at 20% because I cannot stand these characters and the repetitive storytelling.
Nora’s quirkiness is obnoxious, annoying, and unbelievable. Instead of recognizing Derek’s feelings, she railroads over him with fake perkiness. She comes off as so immature and lacking in awareness. She’s also incredibly shallow, which is something I’ve noticed is a hallmark of this author’s books. I got so tired of reading the repetitive statements like: Derek is so huge. Derek is so big. Derek is so much bigger than he was in college. How can Derek’s t-shirt stretch enough to contain his muscles? Derek’s hugeness is stretching his shirt so much that I can see his tattoos through it. Is this man 8 feet tall and 700 pounds of pure muscle or something? Is Nora actually Thumbelina? His size is so overly discussed every time that they are in the same room together (and then later again when she reflects on their time together) that I’m picturing a comic book character like the Hulk.
Derek is very unlikable. I understand how much Nora hurt him. He’s allowed to be hurt, but he’s looking for revenge. He’s aiming to manipulate her and control her and then ruin her career because she broke up with him with no explanation. I just don’t understand how someone can act like this. Hulk is throwing a tantrum, and it’s hard to empathize with someone who is this hostile. He is so unbelievably rude and I can’t find anything good about his personality right now. Nora is just as manipulative in her own way, but not outright rude like this. She’s trying to be nice, even if it’s fake. But seriously, is she so downright clueless that she doesn’t realize how much she hurt him? Does she really not understand why he “hates” her? When I start trying to figure out which character sucks less that’s when I know I’ve got a problem. I hate these two individually and together.
The writing flows nicely and keeps you turning the pages, but maybe this author’s humor just isn’t my humor. Things that I can tell were written to be funny aren’t funny. And hopefully the repetition is edited out before the final printing. How many times is Nathan referred to as Nathan Donelson, quarterback of the Sharks? Not once is Nathan referred to as only his first name, even though anyone who is paying any attention will know who the book is referring to after reading his last name and who he is the first time. Nobody else in the book is referred to by their entire name and job title every time they’re talked about. Bree, from The Cheat Sheet, is “Bree, Nathan Donelson’s wife” multiple times. Perhaps this is done in an effort to help people who haven’t read The Cheat Sheet know what’s going on, but neither character is important enough in this book to need this kind of attention placed on them over all the other secondary characters. I also feel like I read way too many repetitive details about Nora’s and Derek’s shared past. I got tired of reading about both of them reflecting on their prior relationships. I got tired of reading the internal musings of these two after their meetings. I’d read about the actual meeting, then I’d read about Nora thinking about it and recounting things that happened, and then I’d read about Derek thinking about it and recounting things that happened. Then one of them would talk to someone about what happened, and before you know it I’ve basically read the same thing four times.
I’m so disappointed, because The Cheat Sheet is one of my favorite books ever (I re-read it each year) and I wanted a sequel so badly because the guys on Nathan’s team are amazing. I’m sure it’s overwhelming to write a follow-up to such a popular and well-loved book and I commend the author for trying, but this book is trying way too hard.