Category: Adult Fiction

You Deserve Valentine’s Day Brunch by Sarah Hogle | Book Review

Posted July 3, 2025 by Jana in Adult Fiction, Book Review / 5 Comments

You Deserve Valentine’s Day Brunch by Sarah Hogle | Book ReviewYou Deserve Valentine's Day Brunch by Sarah Hogle
Series: You Deserve Each Other #1.5
Also in this series: You Deserve Each Other
Published by Self on January 1, 2020
Genres: Contemporary Romance, Romantic Comedy
Pages: 9
Format: eBook
Source: Author
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A message from the author's Instagram post:

I wrote this wee little Naomi & Nicholas short story a couple years ago for a Valentine's Day blog post. I can't find the post anymore, so I think the host might've deleted it, and every now and then I get a DM asking where someone can find this short story. Unfortunately, I didn't have it saved to my computer, so I always apologized and said it was lost. But then I realized: Duh! It's still in my emails! So if you've been looking for it, here it is.

Thank you from the bottom of my heart to everyone who continues to pick up these chaotic gremlins and give them love.

I’m not usually one to review bonus content like this, but I want the world to know that this very short story exists! Nick and Naomi are celebrating Valentine’s Day, and as we’ve come to learn from them they love to play tricks on each other. This time, Nick is up to something. My heart warmed so much reading this sweet little Valentine’s Day scene between the two of them and now I want to read You Deserve Each Other all over again! If you need a quick little pick-me-up on a rough day, this will do the trick!

This short story can be found on Sarah Hogle’s Instagram. Click here to read it now!


Swept Away by Beth O’Leary | Book Review

Posted June 26, 2025 by Jana in Adult Fiction, Book Review / 1 Comment

Swept Away by Beth O’Leary | Book ReviewSwept Away by Beth O'Leary
Published by Berkley on April 1, 2025
Genres: Contemporary Romance, Romance
Pages: 384
Format: eARC
Source: Publisher (Netgalley)
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Two strangers find themselves stranded at sea together in this epic new love story by bestselling author Beth O’Leary.

What if you were lost at sea…with your one-night stand?

Zeke and Lexi thought it would just be a night of fun. They had no intentions of seeing each other again. Zeke is only in town for the weekend to buy back his late father’s houseboat. Lexi has no time for dating when she needs to help take care of her best friend's daughter.

Going back home with a stranger seems like a perfect escape from their problems. But a miscommunication in the dark, foggy night means no one tied the houseboat to the dock. The next morning, Zeke and Lexi realize all they can see is miles and miles of water.

With just a few provisions on the idle boat, Zeke and Lexi must figure out how to get back home. But aside from their survival, they’re facing another challenge. Because when you’re stuck together for days on end, it gives you a lot of time to get to know someone—and to fall in love with them.

Ok look. This cover, combined with the fact that it’s a survival at sea romance had me salivating. This kind of story is my kryptonite, but goodness me this was soooooo messy. By the end of this review, you will be wondering why I didn’t DNF and my answer is simply that I couldn’t bring myself to look away because I had to know how it all worked out.

The entire book felt like a fever dream. You’ve got a one-night stand between Lexi and Zeke that occurs on a houseboat that drifts out to sea because communication? Who needs it? So they’re just bobbing out there in the North Sea on a boat that’s barely floating and can’t run that they both think is theirs. I was beginning to struggle at this point because I had a hard time believing this could realistically happen, but I hung in there. And then all the things start happening. If something could go wrong, it went wrong. And if something could conveniently happen to move the story along, it did. You’ve got an accidental gaping, festering wound and a concussion between these two people. This boat is covered in sweat and vomit due to the concussion… or maybe food poisoning… sea sickness? All of the above? Probably. They’re living off spoiled food that somehow Zeke is able to whip up into a hot meal even though there’s no running water or electricity on this boat and they’re rationing crackers with old sweaty cheese and cookies the rest of the time. They’re plugging holes with cotton t-shirts and tape and catching rain water in a tarp and bowls that sometimes slide right off the deck into the sea. There’s an outlandish oil rig situation and an injured seagull who they rescue from the water and feed their very meager rations to. Because if the seagull doesn’t survive this, we don’t want to either! And honestly, that would probably be me too so I can’t fault them for that, I guess!

There’s a lot of info dumping and repetition about their individual past struggles (some of which are disturbing… like Zeke’s first love who was well into adulthood while he was only 16 years old… ick). Both of them also have very intense family/found family situations and spend their time discussing them ad nauseam (either out loud or in their heads) when they’re not in the process of potentially succumbing to their individual injuries. And honestly, the dialogue had me cringing at times. Lexi is older than Zeke and will never let anyone forget it. She’s only 31, but you’d think this woman was 75 for how old she keeps telling Zeke she is. I got so tired of her making some self-deprecating comment about her age or her aged body (again, she is THIRTY ONE), just so he would come back and reassure her that age is just a number and she’s beautiful no matter what. He’s known her for less than two weeks and can’t stop thinking about what a beautiful puker she is. Meanwhile, his gaping wound is seeping pus from infection and they really just wish they were making out right now. I’m absolutely sure that no real humans would be lusting after and craving sex from one other under these dire circumstances. I struggled to believe the romance so much because they clearly only bonded over a shared traumatic experience. The chemistry between the two of them was lacking, and I had a hard time picturing them ever falling in love in the real world. They just don’t match, and my mind was never changed on that. These people needed medical attention and therapy, not romance. And then there’s a twist that made me throw the book across the room. Seriously?? What in the Days of Our Lives drama is this? Everyone in this book needs to take a very big step back and do some reassessing.

All in all, I was super intrigued when I read the synopsis. What a unique and interesting sounding story! But there was too much going on here. I enjoyed the parts of the story where survival instincts and ingenuity took over for a little while. It was interesting reading about what they did to try make life easier for themselves and find help, and if this had been just a survival story I think I would have liked it a lot more (especially if it were more believable). But there was a lot of drama layered on top of that surrounding them and their families as well as their individual pasts. I wish the romance aspect hadn’t been there at all and that this was a story about two strangers (or even friends) trying to make it out alive. The romance, family drama, and the comedy of errors throughout their journey to survival was too much for me and I had a hard time suspending the amount of disbelief necessary to fully immerse myself in this story.


The Four Engagement Rings of Sybil Rain by Hannah Brown | Book Review

Posted June 19, 2025 by Jana in Adult Fiction, Book Review / 0 Comments

The Four Engagement Rings of Sybil Rain by Hannah Brown | Book ReviewThe Four Engagement Rings of Sybil Rain by Hannah Brown
Series: Mistakes We Never Made #2
Published by Forever on June 24, 2025
Genres: Contemporary Romance, Romance
Pages: 320
Format: eARC
Source: Publisher (Netgalley)
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Starling Ranch Inn promises to be a tropical paradise, and Sybil can’t wait to escape there, all expenses paid. Well technically the expenses were paid—last year, when she was supposed to go to Hawaii for her honeymoon with her then-fiancé Jamie. But the wedding didn’t go as planned (or at all), and now she’s decided to use those hotel vouchers alone, before they expire.

Sybil’s expecting mai tais, med spas and me-time, so she nearly plunges backwards into the infinity pool when she sees that Jamie has had the same idea! His family business is thinking of buying the resort, so he’s here with a gorgeous, tangerine bikini-clad “colleague” to give the property a once-over.

Desperate to save face in front of the ex who broke her heart at the altar, Sybil accidentally-on-purpose blurts out that she’s here with her boyfriend. But what starts as a harmless lie to spare her dignity soon spirals into an ex-fiancé fiasco when Sebastian—the second of Sybil’s three failed engagements—pops by fresh off a photography gig. Seb’s always up for a good time, and happy to play along ...sparking unexpected jealousy in Jamie.

From snorkeling snafus to stunning vistas to staff parties at the beach, Sybil does her best to juggle two ex-fiancés, but it’s becoming clear that her past of broken promises must be reckoned with once and for all—including that first fiancé, Liam, the one she never talks about…

Is the notorious free-spirit, life-of-the-party, runaway bride Sybil Rain ready to heal from her three past engagements and make room in her heart for a fourth and final chance at love?

Ok. I’d like to preface my review by saying I watched Hannah Brown on The Bachelor and then I watched her season of The Bachelorette. I like Hannah! She’s fun and will never pretend to be someone she’s not. Well, except for an author. I think this is the first celebrity book I’ve read before, and it taught me that I don’t like the idea of ghostwriters. I know that people sign up for this. They go into things knowing that they are writing a book for someone else and that that “someone else” will be taking all the credit. I didn’t know I hated the idea of this until I was reading the book and trying to picture Hannah having written it and not being able to. I’ve gotten to know well enough on TV and then on social media to know that this book does not sound like her. Why did she need to write a book so badly? Like, if she couldn’t or didn’t want to write it herself then why have someone else do it for her? I just don’t get why this is a thing and why people then flock to the celebrity and say things like, “oh you’re such a good writer I loved your book!!!” and they feel confident and happy enough to say “thank you!” when they didn’t write it. I could never! The imposter syndrome would be too severe for me. lol. BUT that’s just me. I would love it if you shared your thoughts on ghostwriters in the comments below.

This book has some undisclosed trigger warnings that blindsided me and could be upsetting to certain readers. I consider these warnings to be spoilers, but I absolutely wish I’d known about them before going in and these aren’t even my personal triggers. If you want to skip my warning, scroll past the pink arrows and italicized words below and pick up with “Review time!”, which has been bolded for your convenience.




There’s a lot of discussion about the main character’s previous miscarriage
that occurred before the book begins, as well as infertility due to her chronic health condition (PCOS).

These topics are broached without any warning and the discussions are
plentiful enough that they’re unavoidable. Please read with care. 




Review time! Let me start out with what I liked, because I have some conflicting feelings that I’m struggling to organize. I did not realize that The Four Engagement Rings of Sybil Rain is a companion novel to Mistakes We Never Made. I have not read MWNM and didn’t feel the least bit lost reading Sybil’s story, so go forth and be unafraid if you’re in the same boat I was in. I love a travel romance, and Sybil’s solo vacation really intrigued me. I wanted to escape to the beach, and I enjoyed the snorkeling and horseback riding and sunsets. The descriptions of the scenery were lovely, and I felt transported to Hawaii. I’ve been through a lot in my dating life, and the idea of making up a new boyfriend in order to save face in front of an ex-fiance is exactly the kind of idea I’d come up with but be too afraid to carry out. The fact that her fake boyfriend ended up being another real ex-fiance of hers was the cherry on top. This. Was. Messy! I’m willing to rip my hair out while I watch The Bachelor franchise shows, so obviously I enjoy drama. And the drama did its thing really, really well. I couldn’t look away and had to know how this all turned out.

But then… there were quite a few things I didn’t like. You can tell that this book was written for a celebrity influencer. There are a lot of brand names and discussions on content creating. Sybil is a content creator for a company that makes period panties and is not just in Hawaii to use her expiring travel vouchers, but to cover a blood moon for her company (because periods…). There’s a lot of talk of harnessing your feminine power from the moon and mentions of a holistic positivity coach when Sybil really should have just been in real therapy instead. Both Sybil and her most recent ex, Jamie (the one she’s lying to about her fake boyfriend), are extremely shallow and immature and go through no growth throughout the story. Sybil in particular is incredibly self-centered and feels she’s perfect and that everyone else she associates with is the problem. She takes no accountability for her choices and actions, and just when I thought she might grow up a bit she slid right back to where she was. I liked Seb, Sybil’s other ex and the one she’s pretending to date, but he’s a caricature of every free-spirited photographer I’ve ever seen in fiction and lacked the emotional depth he easily could have been given. I was excited about the promise of the fake dating trope, but quickly grew disappointed when it took a turn and ended up not being a true “fake dating” romance. This chaotic romance also leans very heavily into the miscommunication trope, which I never enjoy. The pacing felt very off. I got tired of the long passages about Sybil’s previous relationships that were oddly placed randomly throughout the story and threw me out of the present. I have a few more complaints about the actual romance that I consider to be spoilers, so I won’t share them… but yeah, I was disappointed with the ending and really wasn’t rooting for anyone by then.

All in all, this was a big disappointment for me. It started off strong, and I loved the summer vacation vibes and the promise of a fun fake dating romance, but was instead presented with a lackluster second chance romance between two characters who were way too immature to enter a relationship and some emotional content I wasn’t expecting that really dragged things down for me.


The Wrong Suitcase by Laura Jane Williams | Book Review

Posted June 5, 2025 by Jana in Adult Fiction, Book Review / 0 Comments

The Wrong Suitcase by Laura Jane Williams | Book ReviewThe Wrong Suitcase by Laura Jane Williams
Published by Avon on February 12, 2022
Genres: Contemporary Romance, Romance
Pages: 100
Format: eBook
Source: Purchased
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RIGHT PLACE
As she touches down in Italy, Izzy couldn’t be more excited. She’s needed a reason to let her hair down, and she knows that the wedding of the year in a lavish Tuscan castle will be just the ticket…

RIGHT TIME
On the morning of his best friend’s wedding, everything is going wrong for Sam. And when he finally reaches the hotel and unzips his luggage, his day goes from bad to worse…

WRONG SUITCASE
Izzy has a case full of men’s shirts and chinos. Sam has a case full of make-up palettes and bikinis. Could a fateful meeting to switch their bags back be the start of something special? Because in losing their luggage, they’re about to find each other…

I spent a couple hours reading this during a cold January evening, and I enjoyed being whisked away on a sunny Italian vacation. I love Italy, and I loved the sound of the plot but there were a few things missing for me. You need to be ready to suspend a lot of disbelief with this one. The likelihood that a hotel would mix your bag up with someone else’s and then just let you keep it instead of hand it over to them once you notified them of the mix-up is low. That just would not happen. And honestly, I’d be livid if I found out that the person who had my bag went down to the front desk to try and remedy the problem and was then allowed to just take my bag back to his room when he realized a quick fix wasn’t going to happen. But neither character really cares, even though their wedding attire is in those bags and they need them right away. Maybe I’m just an anxious person, but if my bag were lost I’d be panicking and staying in one place so it could be returned to me easily. I would not be wandering all over the place, in and out of the other hotel rooms where my friends were staying when I knew someone was looking for me to return my bag and to get theirs. I’ve got important stuff in there! Anyway, I digress. lol.

The romance was very insta-love and things got physical quickly. This is a vacation romance after all, so I knew what I was getting into but it didn’t feel emotional or romantic to me. It was all lust because they had nothing to go off of other than looks and suitcase contents. I was looking for a lighter, funnier story and I didn’t get that with this one. I found myself skimming as the two leads traversed the hotel looking for each other. For being such a short book, a LOT of time is spent with these two people trying to find one another. I didn’t like how they ended up finally meeting and how the romance went from here. Again, it just didn’t feel romantic. There was no character development or development of the romance. No real depth. And I know this is a novella, so what was I expecting? But I have read some amazing novellas with fully fleshed-out characters and very deep, swoony romances. So length of story is not the problem here. The problem is that so much time was wasted on searching for suitcases. I also hated Izzy’s character and found her to be incredibly selfish and self-absorbed. Sam was ok, but nothing special. The idea was cute, but I needed more. The descriptions of the scenery, however, were great!


Off the Map by Trish Doller | Book Review

Posted May 29, 2025 by Jana in Adult Fiction, Book Review / 1 Comment

Off the Map by Trish Doller | Book ReviewOff the Map by Trish Doller
Series: Beck Sisters #3
Narrator: Sarah Naughton
Published by Macmillan Audio, St Martin's Griffin on March 7, 2023
Genres: Contemporary Romance, Romance, Romantic Comedy
Pages: 272
Format: Audiobook ARC
Source: Publisher (Netgalley)
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On the road to love, you don't need a GPS...

Carla Black’s life motto is “here for a good time, not for a long time.” She’s been travelling the world on her own in her vintage Jeep Wrangler for nearly a decade, stopping only long enough to replenish her adventure fund. She doesn’t do love and she doesn’t ever go home.

Eamon Sullivan is a modern-day cartographer who creates digital maps. His work helps people find their way, but he’s the one who’s lost his sense of direction. He’s unhappy at work, recently dumped, and his one big dream is stalled out—literally.

Fate throws them together when Carla arrives in Dublin for her best friend’s wedding and Eamon is tasked with picking her up from the airport. But what should be a simple drive across Ireland quickly becomes complicated with chemistry-filled detours, unexpected feelings, and a chance at love - if only they choose it.

I will spit it out right now: I did not like this book at all. Maybe it’s because I haven’t read the first two books in the series, but I don’t think that’s it. I don’t think that seeing these characters as secondary characters in someone else’s love story would make me like them more. They both are just sucky people, and since I’m a character driven reader I knew this would most likely go downhill really fast. I listened to this book, though, and I always end up hanging in there longer than I otherwise would have if I’d been reading the book on my own. Sarah Naughton did a very good job reading this book, and the Irish accents were perfect. I loved listening to her. And that, my friend, is why I finished this book at all.

I love road trip books, and two people trekking through Ireland gave me Leap Year vibes. You know, the movie with Amy Adams? One of my top favorite movies ever. And that’s why I jumped into this series with the final book. I needed a Leap Year feeling! It was my mistake for elevating my hopes way too high but, even so, Carla and Eamon suck. They are so irresponsible and see no problem with dragging their feet to their friends’ wedding so they can go on adventures and sleep together a lot. Like. Come on and put your pants on, you idiots, the wedding is waiting for you!! Carla’s personality was also pretty crummy. She has absolutely no tact, and I didn’t find it to be funny or endearing. She’s just rude. Eamon was a jerk. And the fact that their “relationship” just screamed of a string of one-night stands gave me no depth or development. They start getting it on within the first few pages of the book, and I didn’t get it. There’s no romance there, and the spicy scenes were prominent. The story was all over the place for me.

I’ve read multiple reviews saying that the first two books in this series are totally different from this one, and that some people had whiplash from the spice level and lack of emotional depth that they had assumed they’d get again going into this final book. That gives me hope that I might like those, so I will give them a try because I usually like Trish Doller’s writing. Luckily this is not my first book of hers, and luckily I have reviewer friends I trust, or I might have decided to not give her another chance. That cover sure is cute, though, and I did like the scene from the book that’s been illustrated for us. It actually might have been the only scene I liked? lol. Oops.